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Writing the Novel

DEFINITIONS
INGREDIENTS
ADVICE
EXAMPLES
LINKS



Definitions The Novel is a picture of real life and manners, and of the time in which it was written," declared Clara Reeve in 1785, thus distinguishing the novel from the romance, which "describes what never happened nor is likely to happen." By so specifying that the novel depicts life in the present day, the critic was probably observing the derivation of the word novel. Akin to the French word for "news" (nouvelles), it comes from the Italian novella ("something new and small"), a term applied to a newly made story taking place in recent times, and not a traditional story taking place long ago.--X. J. Kennedy, An Introduction to Fiction, 4th ed., 226-7
A novel is never anything but a philosophy put into images.-- Albert Camus
The novel is a prose narrative of some length that has something wrong with it.--Randall Jarrell
Nearly all novels are feeble at the end. This is because the plot requires to be wound up....Incidents and people that occurred at first for their own sake now have to contribute to the dnouement....logic takes over the command from flesh and blood. If it was not for death and marriage I do not know how the average novelist would conclude. Death and marriage are almost his only connection between his characters and his plot....[T]he writer, poor fellow, must be allowed to finish up somehow, he has his living to get like anyone else, so no wonder that nothing is heard but hammering and screwing. This--as far as one can generalize--is the inherent defect of novels: they go off at the end; and there are two explanations of it: firstly, failure of pep, which threatens the novelist like all workers: and secondly, the difficulty which we have been discussing: the characters have been getting out of hand, laying foundations and declining to build on them afterwards, and now the novelist has to labour personally, in order that the job may be done to time. He pretends that the characters are acting for him. He keeps mentioning their names and using inverted commas. But the characters are gone or dead.--E.M. Forster
A short story is short, and a novel is long. Because of this, a short story can waste no words. It can deal with only one or a very few consisciousnesses. It may recount only one central action and one major change or effect in the life of the central character or characters. It can afford no digression that does not directly affect the action. A short story strives for a single emotional impact and imparts a single understanding, though both impact and understanding may be complex. The virtue of a short story is its density. If it is tight, sharp, economic, well knit, and charged, then it is a good short story because it has exploited a central attribute of the form--that it is short.
All of these qualities are praiseworthy in a novel, but a novel may also be comprehensive, vast, and panoramic. It may have power, not because of its economy but becasue of its scope, breadth, and sweep--the virtues of a medium that is long. Therefore, a novel may range through many consciousnesses, cover many years or generations, and travel the world. It may deal with a central line of action and one or several subplots. Many charactes may change; many and various effects may constitute our final understanding. Many digressions may be tolerated and will not destroy the balance of the whole as long as they lead, finally, to some nuance of that understanding.--Janet Burroway, Writing Fiction
A short story is a project. A novel is an obsession. "It is time I started another novel--there is one waiting in the far recesses of my mind, like an octopus beneath a coral reef, occasionally putting out a feeler or two, prodding quite painfully into my conscious mind. I will have to respond, I can see; dive down and haul it out, and up into shallower, brighter waters, where I can get a good look at it....--Fay Weldon


Ingredients
A narrative voice solid as a rock (good for the long haul).
A well-developed p.o.v. with a clear and consistent level of understanding, degree of participation, reliability, etc. ("A novelist can shift view-point if it comes off"--E.M. Forster)
Xters who are believeable and care-aboutable.
A predicament ("Beginning a book is unpleasant. I'm entirely uncertain about the character and the predicament, and a character in a predicament is what I have to begin with"--Philip Roth).
Enough of them to allow for complex interrelationships that might lead the novel into unforeseen areas.
Foreground action ("Character gives us qualities, but it is in actions--what we do--that we are happy or the reverse....All human happiness and misery take the form of action"-- Aristotle)
Texture (mix of narration, dialogue, description, etc.)
A good ear for the way real people speak, especially when they're under pressure.
Organization, a sense of scene, and a complex respect for closure.
A good sense of time, techniques for marking its passage.
Respect for the reader (which doesn't mean you can't challenge the reader).
A lively curiousity (as opposed to a fixed idea) about your xters.
An analogical ability (seeing likenesses, parallels, contrasts, and other relationships between people, events, places, etc.).
A healthy respect for revision ("rewriting and revising are how one's mind comes to inhabit the material fully"--Ted Solotaroff)
The best way to learn to write a novel is to write one. You'll fail. You'll put the failure away in your drawer. You'll apply what you've learned in your second novel.


Advice
E.M. Forster. Aspects of the Novel.
John Gardner. On Becoming a Novelist.
Oakley Hall. The Art and Craft of Novel Writing.
Henry James. The Art of the Novel.
Milan Kundera. The Art of the Novel


Examples
Charles Baxter. First Light.
Robert Boswell. Crooked Hearts.
Julio Cortazar. Hopscotch.
Ellison, Ralph. Invisible Man.
William Faulkner. The Sound and the Fury.
F. Scott Fitzgerald. The Great Gatsby.
Gustave Flaubert. Madame Bovary.
Ford Madox Ford. The Good Soldier.
Kaye Gibbons. Ellen Foster.
Jay McInerny. Bright Lights, Big City.
Gabriel García Marquez. One Hundred Years of Solitude.
Alice McDermott. That Night.
Lynne McFall. Dancer With Bruised Knees.
Lorrie Moore. Anagrams.
Vladimir Nabokov. Pale Fire.
Jean Rhys. Good Morning, Midnight.
Marilynne Robinson. Housekeeping.
J.D. Salinger. The Catcher in the Rye.
Mary Shelley. Frankenstein.
Scott Spencer. Endless Love.
Stone, Robert. A Hall of Mirrors.
Mark Twain. The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn.
Virginia Woolf. To the Lighthouse.


Links
7 Suggestions for Writing the Novel
Hard Facts for First Novelists
How to Write Your Novel
Interview with Joyce Carol Oates
Pure Fiction
Crawford Kilian
Write Page
Salon



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